Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Laura's 100 word challenge

There it was, the last piece of chocolate in the bowl. Should I eat it?
Will I get in trouble by my Dad if I eat it. I reached for the bowl when
all of the sudden my Mum walks in.
"What are you doing Charlie?" said Mum.
"Nothing" I replied. I ran to my room. I hear my Brother Riley's footsteps.
He's heading to the kitchen. Mum went outside. Footsteps start
again. The door opened and I heard a scream. Mum yelled "Riley!!" Dad
arrived. He didn't mind because Riley is 2. Should've eaten it after all.

By Laura


5 comments:

  1. Great story Luara! I love your one hundred word challenge!

    Welldone.

    -Anahera

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  2. Good story laura i really liked the little part at the end.

    Gracin

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  3. I love your storie Laura if you could add more what would you say?
    Lorie

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  4. Hi Laura
    Your story is really interesting and kept me reading untill the very end. What would happen if Charlie ate the choclate?

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    1. Hi Zara
      Thanks for the comment. I think the Charlies Dad would not be mad at all for eaten the chocolate. He wanted someone to eat it anyway.

      -Laura

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