Tuesday, November 13, 2012

100 word challenge Billy

Grandparents are important because they look after you whenever you need
it. They greet you with a smile because they enjoy seeing you. We enjoy
going places with them but they enjoy it even more. They treasure every
second with you. I don't know about you but whenever I go to my
grandparents they spoil me with treats and extremely fun things to do. I
could think of thousands of reasons why grandparents are important but I
can only use 100 words so I'll tell you the most important, grandparents
have lots of love to give you and that's what makes them special.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Billy,
    I like how you used lots of description and you explained why they are important. I like how you put 'They treasure every second with you', because it sounds really nice. Maybe next time you could use some similes. From Holly
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