There it was, the last piece of chocolate in the bowl. Should I eat it?
Will I get in trouble by my Dad if I eat it. I reached for the bowl when
all of the sudden my Mum walks in.
"What are you doing Charlie?" said Mum.
"Nothing" I replied. I ran to my room. I hear my Brother Riley's footsteps.
He's heading to the kitchen. Mum went outside. Footsteps start
again. The door opened and I heard a scream. Mum yelled "Riley!!" Dad
arrived. He didn't mind because Riley is 2. Should've eaten it after all.
By Laura
Great story Luara! I love your one hundred word challenge!
ReplyDeleteWelldone.
-Anahera
Good story laura i really liked the little part at the end.
ReplyDeleteGracin
I love your storie Laura if you could add more what would you say?
ReplyDeleteLorie
Hi Laura
ReplyDeleteYour story is really interesting and kept me reading untill the very end. What would happen if Charlie ate the choclate?
Hi Zara
DeleteThanks for the comment. I think the Charlies Dad would not be mad at all for eaten the chocolate. He wanted someone to eat it anyway.
-Laura