I am sprinting through the Alaskan forest and my tummy started to rumble. So I stop sprinting and start sniffing around for food. I look up and I see smoke. So now I know that someone has got food. I creep deep into the forest. I keep walking and then out of the bushes came a hunter and then I hear a loud gun shot and that is all I remember. Yawn, I just woke up and my leg is aching. Then I notice I have a gunshot in my leg. I feel dizzy and then my heart stops...
Hi Jake
ReplyDeleteI like your story. It's a bit of a scary ending though. Just out of the blue. I'm dead. I like it. Short sharp ending.
Hello Jake,
ReplyDeleteA fox alone in the Alaskan forest... This is a very well written story through the eyes of an animal and not the hunter. How sad the poor fox's life ended this way.
Well done, Jake. :)
@RossMannell
Teacher, NSW, Australia
Great Story Jake!
ReplyDeleteI really want to hear about what happens to the poor Fox.
Does he recover or was he captured and taken?
-Michaela