tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5618360401244489659.post9220781860232791431..comments2023-10-15T00:52:55.418+13:00Comments on Room 6 St Mary's School Mosgiel: 100 WCannekennhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14164979231246027124noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5618360401244489659.post-67941387032776481922012-11-05T16:40:42.643+13:002012-11-05T16:40:42.643+13:00Hi Zara
Great story i had a image in my head. I re...Hi Zara<br />Great story i had a image in my head. I really like snow ball fight do you? <br />GeorgiaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5618360401244489659.post-51084753214683066882012-11-02T00:05:31.748+13:002012-11-02T00:05:31.748+13:00Hi Zara,
This is a great story, everyone loves a ...Hi Zara, <br />This is a great story, everyone loves a good snowball fight!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5618360401244489659.post-53775300139813738932012-10-30T22:28:27.171+13:002012-10-30T22:28:27.171+13:00To begin with I had thoughts about school camps an...To begin with I had thoughts about school camps and people being annoying. It surprised me that it was snowing and really enjoyed reading this part. You use very descriptive language which created vivid pictures in my head.Reidy Park Primary Schoolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11513398960186439808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5618360401244489659.post-39095183750561893382012-10-26T07:53:09.184+13:002012-10-26T07:53:09.184+13:00Hi Zara
I really love your story. I hate bunk beds...Hi Zara<br />I really love your story. I hate bunk beds because I'm always the one who sleeps on the top bunk.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02490183531466523255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5618360401244489659.post-65461365387389497192012-10-25T20:00:32.801+13:002012-10-25T20:00:32.801+13:00Hi Zara
I really like your story it is very uniqu...Hi Zara <br />I really like your story it is very unique.<br />You are very good at writing the 100 WC stories how many have you wrote?<br />Bridget<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5618360401244489659.post-90889740285160361842012-10-25T16:51:00.142+13:002012-10-25T16:51:00.142+13:00Great 100wc Zara,
I love the way you used your wor...Great 100wc Zara,<br />I love the way you used your words, it gave me a great picture of what is happening in the story. <br />-Michaela Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5618360401244489659.post-13769229968408488302012-10-25T03:31:04.534+13:002012-10-25T03:31:04.534+13:00This is a very unique story - I like the way you h...This is a very unique story - I like the way you have used your language to create images - 'with a flourish' and 'stunned expressions' are so powerful!<br /><br />Keep it up!Mr Connorhttp://year5.stjosephsblogs.netnoreply@blogger.com